Wednesday, July 25, 2012

Discovery Channel Telescope Snaps Inaugural Pictures

I'm sorry to hear that their telescope snapped. Maybe they can glue it back together and add a reinforcing rod down the middle.

Hmmm. Let's investigate:

"The very first photos snapped with its 16 million pixel camera are in and they look beautiful."

OK. Bit of a cumbersome sentence, might have looked better with a few commas,

"The very first photos, snapped with its 16 million pixel camera, are in and they look beautiful."

No, that's not quite right. How about:

"The very first photos snapped, with its 16 million pixel camera, are in and they look beautiful."

No, that's not quite right either. How about:

"The very first photos to be snapp

Source: http://rss.slashdot.org/~r/Slashdot/slashdotScience/~3/qKYH-CTRXeU/discovery-channel-telescope-snaps-inaugural-pictures

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